Friday 8 November 2013

Fireworks - By Zara

Every  year  some  people  celebrate  Guy Fawkes. They celebrate with fire works.Some are big and some are small. Fire works make giant loud sounds.Big ones light up the sky and light your way.After they have exploded they up they suddenly disappear.




by Zara

2 comments:

  1. Mrs Skinner (Team5SC)14 November 2013 at 23:07

    These sentences are really great to read Zara because they make me feel I am there watching. I love the sentence about the fireworks disappearing. Very creative!

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  2. You used some lovely adjectives to describe the fireworks. Well done Zara.
    From Broadway East Digital Leaders (Team 5SC)

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